That’s better

This is much more what I have in mind. It’s more direct. has more energy, more brushwork. I had to take the background out before I can see where to go with it. I think I know now. I want to expand on the dressage arena and geometry of the schooling figures, in a subtle way. Also possibly a suggestion of a place, a fence maybe. Maybe a dressage letter? I think I’ll have time tomorrow, after the farmers’ market.

Tomorrow, I hope we are bringing little green peppers in baskets. They are to tease those that are waiting for our yummy padron peppers. These are actually corno di toro peppers picked very young. They too, are quite wonderful fried and salted.


2 responses to “That’s better

  1. I like it more abstract too. I can’t seem to find the right balance. I’ll keep trying. Thanks for the feedback. I like the critique aspects of this forum.

  2. I love this one without a back round…more abstract feeling, less literal. Sooooo good!

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